Memories

Written about a year ago? Now in my opinion it is very poorly written

People ask her if she’s ok.

She nods and says yes.

But what she really wants is you, and only you too realize that she’s not.

She fakes a smile everyday

Because she’s afraid shell burst out in to tears,

And give away her secret.

 

She misses the days when you’d show up on her doorstep at 2am in the morning.

The Sundays shed spend making you cups of tea, and watching TNA.

The afternoons she’d spend sleeping in your bed, whilst you play on the X-Box.

The cuddles you’d give her when she gets back from school.

The way you’d look at her as you held her in your arms and said ‘I love you’.

 

These are the things she misses,

The things why she cries herself to sleep.

You broke her…..

 

You broke me.

Reviews

[Sammy]

This is such a sad poem, and the your emotions are conveyed perfectly. Heart-tugging and very easy to relate to. Good write :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Yes it evokes a sense of pathos in me.

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such a sad wriite, yet touching