Chaos

Chaos

A Poem by Lushan

The spirit is

split

 and thrown into

the maelstrom. 

Re          organised,

metastasised,

crystalized. 

Light and dark in

Juxta/position,

clear silhouette defined.

The path out

lined. 

Time to step. 

Lifting of ligament,

moving of muscle.

Step.

Gain momentum.

 

Steps.

© 2012 Lushan


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I like how your poems have motion to them in many cases I've noticed, a sort of soft momentum. "Juxta/position" this formatting gave me a new formatting idea. The forward slash used to break two words like this, especially if the next word begins in P or O, could imply something falling or leaning onto a head lol. Nice work.

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Added on October 31, 2012
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Tags: upheavel, chaos, uncertainty

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Lushan
Lushan

Gauteng, Roodepoort, South Africa



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