In Dark

The door is closed inside the dark

                         corridor.

I hear my footsteps sound in the

 

                          empty.

 

In the fashion

 of caverns

that are dark

I do not know its                                 depth.

 

 

I am lost.

 

I have lost

 

                        the key

I have lost

 

the memory of locking

                       the door.

 

I can hear it

                        growl.

 

Reviews

[Damien Davison]

The last line, 'I can hear it growl', made my heart jump a little. Nice job.

[Lushan]

Always nice to get such an emphatic response. thank you.