Too

Too

A Poem by Lushan

How easily we      slip

into the hum

drum of day-to-

day,              like today

for instance; a day

after; when

the moon has       set

and

the sparkles are blown

      away…

I hear the door

                             close

and

the water run.

© 2012 Lushan


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"How easily we slip into the hum/drum of day-to-day," is the perfect opening for such a wonderful poem! Very enjoyable.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lushan

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
Pearlie

12 Years Ago

could you do me a favour and review my 'Delilah' short story? Thanks hon xx
Lushan

12 Years Ago

will do.

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Added on October 10, 2012
Last Updated on October 10, 2012
Tags: relationships, reality, life, disillusion

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Lushan
Lushan

Gauteng, Roodepoort, South Africa



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