After

After

A Poem by Lushan

I am ignorant

 I am empty

 I am without the

skill required to appear

 skilled.

 

 

I am words

 I am feelings

 I am raw emotion

 coming to the surface in

 rough bubbles.

 

I am stripped

 I am scrutinized

 I am criticized

 I am ready to receive

 

and be

 

filled.

© 2012 Lushan


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~ ah... a look at the self which is very poetic and very insightful...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lushan

12 Years Ago

thank you serah.
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12 Years Ago

~ you're very welcome...

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Added on October 2, 2012
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Tags: spirituality, being, love

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Lushan
Lushan

Gauteng, Roodepoort, South Africa



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