Broken Bowl

Might be a bit on the acidic side, but true nonetheless.

When it comes right down to it

You simply aren’t enough person

To hold the love of another

Like a broken bowl, or a fractured glass

You hemorrhage the beauty of another

Till you drown in your own ineptitude

For this flaw, I feel somewhat sorry

But my empathy is tempered

By the ironic fact

That you simply aren’t enough person

To hear the truth from another

Reviews

[Melbourne Bound]

Well said...Boom, out of the park.

Good write.

[moog-drika]

this is so true...
loved the work.... ^_^

[OTownPete]

In between the lines you slipped this person the truth anyway.

[Sarrow]

I thought this had a lot of strength to it, like determination to for the truth to be heard. I really enjoyed it for that reason.

[thespaceinmybed]

Wonderful, I like the honesty in this. That last line really hits hard. Great job.