Those Little Moments

a simple little thing I wrote to help me cope with losing someone

Bring me to your shore

Lay me upon your sands

Watch my footprints fade from your tides

And remember me

In those little moments

Between the dark and dawn

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

That's an amazin' one fella...!
I liked this piece much, not only liked but i loved too, because of this line
Bring me to your shore
And remember me
In those little moments
Between the dark.......nice one fella...

it's short n simple but it'f illed with your moments...every one wats to make such kinda a moments...thereby to memorise in future...too.....

nice write fella....
have a nice writin' :)

[SyberRose]

Memories live on forever...enjoyed...SyberRose

[Hester Vane]

Simple but elegant and beautiful! Well written!