Lost In You

Another poem that seems like a good idea at 2 AM that probably isn't

I get lost in you

A minotaur in the maze of what you do to me

I see the real you

Hidden behind the stains and smiles you pretend to be

I try to show you

That not all this world can offer is pain and misery

I wish to hold you  

So you could know a touch that offers warmth and safety

I want to show you

The beauty of who you truly are is what I see

I get lost in you

And I long for just one chance to get you lost in me

Reviews

[Tom]

Have to hand it to you Kenneth your producing some top draw writing at the moment loved it!

[Heather]

whoa the ending.. was just perfect. I loved how you showed how you are through all the ugly, you see past the pain and you just want to be seen too.. I really enjoyed this