Death

Death

A Poem by Luna

This is no cage to dream in
No more grief over the living
No more tears 
Wonderland is but a wasted sun
Faces look away from us, too dark to see
Crowds gather around our killings
Whispers, louder than our inner selves
Inner thoughts, inner madness
Animals rise from the dead to our calls, 
Count your days in this wonderland, count our heads
Drop your gun! 
This is no cage to die in, this is a dream of god
A trap to the living dead
Guns escape through shattered walls,
No souls leave this land, 
No souls but our own.

© 2016 Luna


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Very well said in a metaphoric melody. You are very right but it will take something big to wake the minds of a sleepless to be. Not all of us are rare souls that dance in a wind.

Posted 6 Years Ago


'This is no cage to die in, this is a dream of god.'

Have read this three times, each time, trying to find its core. Your phrases seem to scream against life, glory in death, thinking of it as the final and finest finish. Perhaps it is.. seems that evil escapes the world once death closes its mighty door?

Posted 7 Years Ago



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