Beautiful Mess

Beautiful Mess

A Poem by s.ms
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something is missing in her art

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worries and fears entangle in her heart

something is missing in her art

hard to find in her beautiful mess

is a little thread of happiness

search low and deep

it will eventually come out in the heap

be patient, it will take some time,

to heal her past and make it all fine

remember to be kind as her soul is still healing

the trauma she had locked inside

 

s.ms

© 2019 s.ms


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This is amazing. When you’re a mess and you can’t even throw yourself into your work because it just feels as messy as you. It so accurately explains that feeling, but I love the satisfying message of hope and describing it as a piece of thread. Beautiful and hopeful, and relatable. Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


s.ms

2 Years Ago

I really appreciate this! Thank you! You are so right, emotions can greatly affect how one function .. read more
Sad, but written well! It takes time for one's heart to heal. You penned this poem perfectly!

Posted 2 Years Ago


s.ms

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your words! Yes, things do take time unfortunately.
KAREN

2 Years Ago

My pleasure
perfect oxymoron to describe the aftermath of a relationship gone wrong and the heart we live with from then on...
lots locked inside..patience needed to open those locks.

j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


s.ms

5 Years Ago

mmm yes, thank you for your review! :)
I love those words , made me want to know more

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on March 4, 2018
Last Updated on September 3, 2019
Tags: Trauma, Worries

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