Believe

Believe

A Story by Ice
"

Idk what to say about this~

"

You feel like you’re nothing,

Just a small, worthless piece of junk.

 

Your world is slowly falling apart,

And you cannot fix it no matter how hard you try.

 

You feel like giving up,

And to just let yourself fall.

 

But that one light prevents you from doing so.

 

It tells you to believe in yourself,

To stand up and fight for what you believe in,

To not fall because of others,

To not fear doing the things you want to do,

To cast away all your doubts

And believe in yourself.

 

Believe in that light,

And pick yourself up

And continue to chase your dreams,

Until

The day that you finally reach them.

© 2012 Ice


Author's Note

Ice
Hope you enjoyed this spur-of-the-moment piece :)

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Like I said in your other piece, you're a great writer! I really like it how your story didn't have a plot, but still managed to tell me something. Also, I liked how personal it feels, because, that way, it managed to touch me. I almost cried, to be honest. Congratulations

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ice

12 Years Ago

o.o R-Really? Thank you so much!!! Don't cry though, I'd feel bad xD
Fernanda

12 Years Ago

I cried because it's beautiful, you're not supposed to feel bad!
Ice

12 Years Ago

>.< Thank you!!



Reviews

I loved this:) and a part of me really needed to hear it right now. Very well worded and inspirational:) The light vaugly reminded me of God (don't know if yu intended it that way, but my Christian mind interprited it as such haha). ANywaaayyys nice work!
God Bless:)
~Mickey

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ice

12 Years Ago

>.< Believe in yourself! :) I didn't really intend it like that, but hey, every reader has different.. read more
Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

don't worry I got that party of it too:P
this was so inspirational, and uplifting! i have to shelve this one :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ice

12 Years Ago

o.o Somehow, I missed this review... I'm sorry! Thank you so much though! >.
Aehr

12 Years Ago

no prob!
Like I said in your other piece, you're a great writer! I really like it how your story didn't have a plot, but still managed to tell me something. Also, I liked how personal it feels, because, that way, it managed to touch me. I almost cried, to be honest. Congratulations

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ice

12 Years Ago

o.o R-Really? Thank you so much!!! Don't cry though, I'd feel bad xD
Fernanda

12 Years Ago

I cried because it's beautiful, you're not supposed to feel bad!
Ice

12 Years Ago

>.< Thank you!!
........is it bad that I tell you your spur of the moment stories are more beautiful then your normal stories??? This is BRILLIANT!! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rose of Gondor

12 Years Ago

Well...still...they're deeper and more...hmmmm *sighs dreamily* Nice....
Ice

12 Years Ago

lol thanks~
Rose of Gondor

12 Years Ago

welcomes. :D

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Added on August 26, 2012
Last Updated on August 26, 2012
Tags: Believe, In, Yourself, And, One, Day, Your, Dreams, Will, Come, True

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Ice
Ice

SLC, UT



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