Mirror, Mirror

Mirror, Mirror on my wall

I just want to be thin, pretty and tall

Mirror, Mirror if I change my hair

maybe someone will start to care?

Mirror, Mirror if I stare myself

at least i'll be beautiful forget my heath

Mirror, Mirror if I cut my wrist

will I feel like I exist?

Mirror, Mirror don't you?

what you show is ruining me

for far to long it had watched her cry

so the mirror decided to reply

"what you think you? it isn't true

this misery if found inside of you."

"don't lock yourself in a broken soul,

of I promise you one day, you'll all control."

Reviews

[Iris]

You decided to be just a bit more morbid inn this one. I still love it. You should go professional with poems like that.

[Annie Gryphon]

another sad, nearly heart breaking poem. I like the structure of that poem very much. The repeating of "mirror mirror" brings magic from the fairy tales but with the next words it's clear that we are in very modern times here. "thin, pretty, tall", These 3 words say how hard it is being a girl. It's sad but also a bit rebellious and i like it.

[Silver]

Oh I really love this one !