Kneel for them

When I wrote this I was upset and emotional so a lot of personal feeling came into it. I guess this is the more darker side to my writing. My emotions flared when I heard about some Betrayal...

To some we are seen as beauty,

To others we are mere tools,

To the sane we are only shadows,

And to the insane we are toys...

We are used and discarded,

We are beaten... and broken,

Our screams to be free,in the end,

Are only to be overpowered,

By their screams for more,

Caged in the very air we breath,

Our souls are trapped,

In this smothering atmosphere,

Kneel and pray for the broken,

Pray that pain will let them go.

Author's Note

Please excuse any spelling or punctuation mistakes...etc...

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

It certainly sounds like you weren't treated very well by someone. You're too good for that, so I think it's best that you try and avoid such situations.

[SoulofManyFaces]

This is a powerful poem, your voice coming
across even in only words. I love these lines:
To some we are seen as beauty,
To others we are mere tools,
To the sane we are only shadows,
And to the insane we are toys...
The ending is final, and to the point.
I love reading poems like this when a person
is emotional, and the words just flow..great job!