Soul's insight

This is again a mixture of whatever was running through my mind at the time, It has a few hidden meanings and personal connections. I hope you like it... xXx

My insides are not but ashen remains, 

It is a poisoned system,

And a poisoned mind,

You have to take only a short glance too see,

A mask is constructed to hide the pain

To find strength in beauty,

To find strength in peace,

Is to see through hollow faces,

And the outstretched lies in darkness

To notice the Wing beat of a butterfly,

To a glacier crashing to the ocean floor,

Is to notice the full extent of consciousness,

And a soul's awareness to life's strains and it's rewards,

To find forgiveness for life's flaws,

To find and explore the forest of faith,

Is to heal ashen remains,

And cure the deepest poisons,

Which taint the blood of innocence,

And cover faces in screaming masks,

Scared, broken, scarred hands are healing...

 

Author's Note

Please excuse any punctuation mistakes...etc.. i may have made...

Reviews

[Lou Evans]

A beautiful poem, everything is perfect in it. I didn't see any punctuation mistakes. But it's poetry so therefore, it does not necessarily matter. The words are important. What beautiful words they were, too. It was a great poem with everything coming together in the end.

[SoulofManyFaces]

This is such a beautful spiritual poem about life and the
spirit to survive. Being a spiritual person myself, I can relate.
A pretty picture you have with the poem too, refreshing.

[crazyman172]

Beautiful imagery! I loved the symbolism too...the poem flows perfectly.