Lights embrace

To be honest i have been so confused lately this is just a mixture of everything i was thinking :).

A burning ember dances,

It flies and twists with the flames,

Floating Towards the stars it's simple beauty,

Like the moon now hangs in the gentle breeze...

Like fireflies, Embers gather and light the way,

A path is formed for me to embrace...

Burning so brightly, enough to blind,

Heart smashed into a thousand tiny pieces,

And a soul in threads, I turn away.

When I turn to face, what in time should have been my light,

I find only a world shrouded in love's ash,

A world of darkness and hate,

A world of fear.

Paths of faith and those of trust,

Paths in the dark and through the abyss,

Each time I'm blinded I loose a fragile piece,

A memory or a Trace,

It won't be long before,

Time takes a hold and i will no longer be able to retrieve,

The pieces of me, taken and teased...

It is in the heavens and the soul so pure,

So right,

That now I seek forgiveness and faith,

My hand to be taken, and my tears to be caught...

Pieces restored, God is my healer. 

Author's Note

This is my first piece here. And i know i need a lot of practice but i usually only write when i am angry or upset so this was completely different for me., xXx

Reviews

[Lightfalls]

Oh I'm so glad you posted this!! It is really is beautiful and so full of meaning, you know how when you read something and you can just feel that it is alive with real feeling? That's how this was, exactly like that. A really great writing....tragic and hopeful at the same time...like life.

Interesting that just like cold is not an entity in and of itself, it is only an absense of heat...Darkness is always only the absense of light. It's tragic what a loss that is. In the perfect way that things were meant to be, there would have never been any such loss, sin is always an absense of God.

[TransparentHearts]

Wow this was really incredible! I love this beautiful piece and it's a piece of art!

[there is no more from m..]

what a beautiful Piece

[crazyman172]

Nice job! I love the power impacted by the words. I LOVE poems like this!! They're so unique and full of meaning. Keep writing, it'll inspire many! :D

[*Evelen*]

This was beautiful and powerful. Sadness fills my heart with pain of my past memmories. Well done=) loved it=)

[Samuel Dickens]

Probably the most important thing is that used your words as a release. Improved writing can be learned with practice, but it must have behind it an outpouring of yourself, and this you have done.