Release.

The light fades out,

And slowly stars burst into life.

 

The moon hangs precariously low-

At any given moment, it may come crashing down.

 

The City settles into silence

The first moment of peace, in a world of fierce chaos.

 

A chorus of deep sighs…

Calm ensues.

It may not last,

So drink it in while you have the opportunity,

The chance.

 

And give into it.

Fall into it.

Release.

Author's Note

I'd love feedback. <3

Reviews

[samurai212]

You are great :)

[Mr. ECHO]

i really like this one.

[Rene Velez]

its almost like reading a sunset, nice imagery, nice write, pay the feedback forward not enough of that going on

[Solidad]

"So drink it in while you have the opportunity"

This piece was eloquent without being too wordy. I'm quite glad I got to drink it in. Pour me another shot if this is what your words taste like. J'adore

[Brooke Nicole Plummer]

short, simple, nailed it.