Choked in Shadows

Choked in Shadows

A Poem by Selena
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It vividly captures the suffocating effects of someone else's destructive habits, like smoking, on an innocent bystander. The imagery of suffocation, addiction, and despair creates a strong emotional

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Stop! I can't breathe, you have me caught,

Darth Vader's grasp, a battle I never sought.

My lungs are squeezing, a vice made of despair,

Suffocating whispers in a toxic air.


Why should I suffer, why should I choke,

Paying for the habits of your smoky cloak?

Each breath a struggle, each moment a crime,

I glimpse my tomb long before my time.


Stop! I can't breathe, you’re shrouded in mist,

Your addiction’s embrace, an unforgiving twist.

When I was younger, I had no choice,

A silent witness, with my muffled voice.


Do you know that your clouds seek me out?

No matter the distance, there's no escaping doubt.

With each exhale, I feel my spirit wane,

Your pleasure is killing me, feeding the pain.


So please, just stop it, can’t you see it too?

You’re wrapped in a vice, and it’s choking you.

Together we’re lost in this pit of despair,

Let’s fight through the darkness, let’s breathe in fresh air.

Copyright © LunaMoonSkye. 2024. All rights reserved.


© 2024 Selena


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Added on November 24, 2024
Last Updated on November 24, 2024
Tags: smoking, poetry, poem, suffocation

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Selena
Selena

London, OH



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