Choked in ShadowsA Poem by SelenaIt vividly captures the suffocating effects of someone else's destructive habits, like smoking, on an innocent bystander. The imagery of suffocation, addiction, and despair creates a strong emotionalStop! I can't breathe, you have me caught, Darth Vader's grasp, a battle I never sought. My lungs are squeezing, a vice made of despair, Suffocating whispers in a toxic air. Why should I suffer, why should I choke, Paying for the habits of your smoky cloak? Each breath a struggle, each moment a crime, I glimpse my tomb long before my time. Stop! I can't breathe, you’re shrouded in mist, Your addiction’s embrace, an unforgiving twist. When I was younger, I had no choice, A silent witness, with my muffled voice. Do you know that your clouds seek me out? No matter the distance, there's no escaping doubt. With each exhale, I feel my spirit wane, Your pleasure is killing me, feeding the pain. So please, just stop it, can’t you see it too? You’re wrapped in a vice, and it’s choking you. Together we’re lost in this pit of despair, Let’s fight through the darkness, let’s breathe in fresh air. Copyright © LunaMoonSkye. 2024. All rights reserved. © 2024 Selena |
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Added on November 24, 2024 Last Updated on November 24, 2024 Tags: smoking, poetry, poem, suffocation AuthorSelenaLondon, OHAboutA Journey Through Art and Self-Expression Born in the winter of 1980, my early memories are vividly interlaced with the sounds of music. The late 80s were a particularly vibrant time, and I found j.. more..Writing
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