Circle

a circle

reminds me when I was little

when I go round and round

never care as long as I giggle and titter.

 

a circle

reminds me of his deep love

a no ending love

continuously lifting me up.

 

a circle

reminds me of this life

must go on and on and on

no matter what the ending dictates

Reviews

[Pax]

a life cycle of someone, perhaps yours, perhaps someone else... either way everyone can relate to its circling journey...

very nicely penned my friend..

[Sydney Dreama]

Very sweet and to the point. I myself like how it is not written like a normal poem. I think that it adds to the sweet child like feel that you have going.

[William J. Marsh]

This is an adorable little poem. I love the way it rings like a musicale metaphor of life.

[Wolfwind]

Mirth, Passion and Life. Each stanza symbolize a powerful need in the human soul. The first we are tought in youth, which is the ability to smile and laugh and play. The second we learn through the course, an endless evolving love. A need within our souls that powers us like the wind in the sails of ship. The third is the journey. Sail upon the sea of existance, powered by the winds of love and given humanity with the grace of a laugh. To where we go is anybody's guess... But trek on we must.

Great Ink! Thanks for sharing!
Aaron - Wolfwind

[shallimarRose]

I like the repeating beginnings..
Repetition for emphasis is always a good thing..
The circle of life always reminds me of the lion king now..
Nice poem. shallimarRose

[Sami Khalil]

I like this poem , the repetition and the meanings...:)

[ron]

That's a very nice sentiment. Nice poem.

[Ciara Di Salle]

The repetition of "a circle" is really well used!