A Simple Wish...

The One wish I always wanted....

A Simple Wish.....

This simple wish was mine to cast
To bring on the present, to forget the past
A simple cry, a simple tear
A person, I shall never fear
The pain of heartache, the pain of sorrow
Waiting for the moon to set, to see the sun of tomorrow
A simple rose yet to bloom
To never believe in impending doom
To see the rose of love's first sight
Then see it whither, into the dark of night
A painful memory, a painful tear
To feel one's love, it only brings fear
So I make this very simple wish to the stars above
And this wish shall fly on the wings of a dove
To bring peace to all, and serenity to the needed
This is just...

My Simple Wish

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Bonnie]

Simple and deep. What a lovely combination of words and contrasts.

Rich emotions evoked, and a lovely positive, gentle ending.

I love it!

[Andromeda]

fantastic. In some spots it reminded me of The Beauty and the Beast...
the rhyming was amazing.

[meagansphilosophy]

amazing work!
i wish i had the skills to do such poetry as you do.
I'm not very tallented when it comes to rhyming, but you are!

keep up the great work!(:

[Mark D. Chevalier]

SImplistic in form, yet complex in meaning and depth of emotion. I particularly liked: "The pain of heartache, the pain of sorrow Waiting for the moon to set, to see the sun of tomorrow."
Nice work!
M

[Queen of the Damned]

I love the way you wrote this using the comparisons...(example)A simple rose yet to bloom
To never believe in impending doom.
Keep up the good work, and I look forward to seeing some more of your work.

[lauren emily]

This is a very good poem! We all wish for a lot of these things all the time(I know I do).
You did a really good job with this, keep up the good work!
Lauren