Catch The Sky.

I swam in life so deep 
I drowned 
I drank the sea 
And was hungry for more.

It was bad I know 
But if it can fill the empty side of life
Then why not.

You can try to save me 
But I won't hold on 
Let me go so I can be one with the world. 

I made a choice and swam further 
I caught the sky and fell asleep
But if I can embrace the depth of my heart 
I'll drown to the bottom of the sky.

But when I gasp for air 
I'll whisper your name to the clouds 
And when it rains, it'll rain your name for eternity. 

                                 

Author's Note

I was looking at the sky this afternoon, and this little poem manipulated my mind all day, i had to write it :)

Reviews

[Rick r]

I'll whisper your name to the clouds
And when it rains, it'll rain your name for eternity.

Perfect! Yea...just like that. Love this poem, Luna. All of it.
Rick

[La Luna]

I like those lines to. And thank you Rick that's kind of you .
Luna

[El-Amin Yusuf Alronawy]

Wow! really a good poem. I love your grasping abilities......

[La Luna]

Thank you for the lovely review, truly appreciate it :).

[writ rajat]

As written in author"s note you did great to write it up immedately

[La Luna]

Thank you, I'm happy you stopped by :)

[writ rajat]

what I stop

[Goat]

This is a beautiful poem with a great hidden meaning. I love the comparisons in this poem. Good job!

[La Luna]

Thank you, I'm truly touched :)