Two Worlds.

Two Worlds.

A Poem by La Luna


Two worlds fought and brushed each 
until one disappeared completely 
but once upon a time, they were two strong kingdoms with both king and queen 

One was blue and one was orange 
Like the end of the horizon 
The blue bruised the orange 
But it came first and the other ended with a smile like a summers evening.

Two worlds diverged into two roads 
I had to travel one, the one with the most colours. 
Blue is my colour but orange is my sky.
And maybe blue is my night. 

When a world disappears what do you call it?
I call it abandonment 
but I can also call it home. 

I lost some memories of the world I once knew, but it comes to me in déjà vu 
and at times I day dream and I get lost and never find my way. 

Feelings of those who raised me disappear like the two worlds I once called home. 

© 2014 La Luna


Author's Note

La Luna
This poem is probably hard to interpret. And everyone might have their own interpretation but i would like to know what your interpretations are :)...

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I think I would add the word "other" to the last line. It does ramble a bit. I think your choice of the road with the most color will be the right choice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you stopped by :)
Nice write, i like your idea of letting the reader interpret it. It should generate a lot of interesting reviews! To me it sounds like two parents getting a divorce, and having to choose which one to live with,

Posted 10 Years Ago


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La Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you, and I like your interpretation of this poem :)
This is one interesting write, and the end was essence of your deep and meaninful poetry. Simply brilliant

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much. I'm glad you found it interesting :)
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're most welcome

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La Luna
La Luna

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