She Danced In Colours.

 

When her world was black&white 

she danced in colours 

she twirled and spun 

she almost fell. 

 

She danced 

and somehow she looked lonely 

her feet looking for comfort 

the cold concrete abandoning her.  

 

Even her shadow 

had no soul 

fading away slowly. 

 

She breathed 

and in her hollow breath 

you could see a caged bird.

 

Did she dance to forget 

or did she imagine a different world 

                a world with colours.   

  

But when you looked from afar

she danced beneath the sun 

the sun was bright 

the sun was laughing

she had no idea. 

 

 

Reviews

[Linda alexander]

Great write, clear expressions, a person with depression who lost colors, can not dance, sometimes even if she tried, may fall, it can be either she forgot to dance or she did not have a colorful world to support her dancing, really enjoyed, many will relate to this poem, picture gave more impact to the message

[La Luna]

I love the way you have your own interpretation of this poem. One of the reasons why writing poems is an amazing thing everyone can relate to it. Thank you for stoping by.

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome, very minimum poets want all to understand his or her own way, I am against that approach, as far as it is not negatively misinterpreted, Iam fine, in my writing reader is the boss

[La Luna]

I'm glad you feel that way. And I understand what you mean :) thanks

[Everett DeValle]

Lovely sentiments...beautifully written. Excellent.

[La Luna]

Thank you for the lovely review :)...

[Everett DeValle]

You are very welcome.

[Ren Grace]

beautiful imagery done here :) Awesome job!

[La Luna]

Thank Lauren :) x

[Devesh]

"Even her shadow
had no soul
fading away slowly."

I loved these lines. This poem is beautifully written. Thanks for sharing! =)

[La Luna]

Thank you for stoping by. :)

[Devesh]

You're welcome! =)

[Sami Khalil]

Beautiful, touching, mesmerizing...:)....................

[La Luna]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

[Sami Khalil]

I did...You are welcome...:)....................

[Tena Luvs]

"Did she dance to forget

or did she imagine a different world

a world with colours. "


Beautifully written poem.

[La Luna]

Thank you. I appreciate it :)