Tragic War.

Tragic War.

A Poem by La Luna

You became a tragic war to me 
 my feelings were never the same. 

© 2014 La Luna


Author's Note

La Luna
This quote was in my head all day, I just had to write it down. I might turn it into a poem soon :)

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This would make a great part in a poem (like you mentioned doing). I definitely think you should expand on it and see what you come up with. :)

~Stefanie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much. And i'm still trying to write it but i'm not liking them so far, but hopefully .. read more
Wow. Amazing how you write...bravo.....................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank very much I appreciate it dearly. :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)....................
We can have such mixed feelings about certain individuals...and it does seems like an inner conflict breaks out when we think about that person. You have said a lot in two lines....I hope you elaborate on this soon. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

awwh thank you Lydia. And i will :)

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Added on February 10, 2014
Last Updated on March 1, 2014
Tags: Love war, love, you, him, dark, feelings, blue, life, broken, heart, past, us, 2014, happy, war, Dark Hate Life Sad adven

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La Luna
La Luna

London, United Kingdom



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