I Didn't Know...

I Didn't Know...

A Poem by La Luna

I used to think being alone is good 
i don't know why 
but i always thought i was strong that way
i thought i was a mountain 
mountains never bow down, no matter the storm 
That's until i met you 
i didn't know us humans were capable of such feelings
neither did i know the damage one can cause 
At some point i thought i was pure 
i didn't even know the feeling of Love 
or that it was contagious
childish i know 
You made me this way 
'weak'
and now your gone 
'stupid me'
 alone again
I don't like it anymore.

© 2014 La Luna


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i didn't even know the feeling of Love 
or that it was contagious
childish i know 
You made me this way 
'weak'
and now your gone 
'stupid me'
 alone again
I don't like it anymore.

Simple yet full of feelings, i adore your poetry

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

11 Years Ago

Thank you, you're kind :)



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"i thought i was a mountain

mountains never bow down, no matter the storm

That's until i met you"

This was so good and touching...:)...................

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

11 Years Ago

Hahah thank you I'm truly glad you liked it. Those are my favourite lines to :) ...
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:)...............
i didn't even know the feeling of Love 
or that it was contagious
childish i know 
You made me this way 
'weak'
and now your gone 
'stupid me'
 alone again
I don't like it anymore.

Simple yet full of feelings, i adore your poetry

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

11 Years Ago

Thank you, you're kind :)

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La Luna
La Luna

London, United Kingdom



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