You are the words in my head
I keep redrafting
I don't think you deserve such nice letters
But I can't help it
you’re my poetry.
Even the littlest things can make me write about you
Today I smelt roses
I wrote you love letters
I wrote your address
And at the bottom I wrote the 14th.
I hope you get it by the 14th
Even then I found myself writing a little poetry for you
It went by the lines of
You make me sick
But I want a kiss
You leave me wondering
Till my heart skips
How do you feel when you think about me
Does it feel like bricks on your chest?
[Scribble].
"I can't send him this"
I wonder
Will he read it over and over again?
But then I can't help it
after all
You make me sick
But I want a kiss
You leave me wondering
Till my heart skips
How do you feel when you think about me
Does it feel like bricks on your chest?
[Scribble].
You kept your heart and soul in your poetry, good read
Pssst you bet. I feel like a deprived child. Wanted to keep on coming for more. Your romantic character in this piece feels alive and quite cute like a true love story
I usually have my muse in my mind.... and then I see me in the poem. He may be the poetry but you are the poet
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you. And I understand what you mean. But sometimes that one person can inspire you to write so.. read moreThank you. And I understand what you mean. But sometimes that one person can inspire you to write something beautiful ;).
You make me sick
But I want a kiss
You leave me wondering
Till my heart skips
How do you feel when you think about me
Does it feel like bricks on your chest?
[Scribble].
You kept your heart and soul in your poetry, good read
Yes i do my boyfriend of almost 2 years :)
When you have someone you love, you cant help but use them as inspiration, when you write.
Your writing when writing of that person, comes out better because its coming from your heart :)
This was very heartfelt and emotional :)
I enjoyed this write :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Exactly my point... And thank you I'm glad you liked it :)
Hi. My name is Luna, I believe in many things, and I find many things beautiful in this world, at first i never cared, but when I started writing I observed every Scene that was around me. One being p.. more..