He's My Poetry...

He's My Poetry...

A Poem by La Luna

You are the words in my head 
I keep redrafting 
I don't think you deserve such nice letters 
But I can't help it 
you’re my poetry.

Even the littlest things can make me write about you
Today I smelt roses 
I wrote you love letters
I wrote your address 
And at the bottom I wrote the 14th.

I hope you get it by the 14th 
Even then I found myself writing a little poetry for you
It went by the lines of

 

You make me sick 
But I want a kiss 
You leave me wondering 
Till my heart skips 
How do you feel when you think about me 
Does it feel like bricks on your chest? 
[Scribble].

"I can't send him this"
I wonder 
Will he read it over and over again? 
But then I can't help it 
after all

He’s the poetry. 

 

© 2014 La Luna


Author's Note

La Luna
Do you guys have that one person on your mind every time you write?

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You make me sick 
But I want a kiss 
You leave me wondering 
Till my heart skips 
How do you feel when you think about me 
Does it feel like bricks on your chest? 
[Scribble].

You kept your heart and soul in your poetry, good read

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind words A. Amos :)
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're welcome my friend



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Pssst you bet. I feel like a deprived child. Wanted to keep on coming for more. Your romantic character in this piece feels alive and quite cute like a true love story

Posted 7 Years Ago


One of your bet. The title is wonderful too...:)...................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much Sami ;) ...
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).....................
I usually have my muse in my mind.... and then I see me in the poem. He may be the poetry but you are the poet

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you. And I understand what you mean. But sometimes that one person can inspire you to write so.. read more
You make me sick 
But I want a kiss 
You leave me wondering 
Till my heart skips 
How do you feel when you think about me 
Does it feel like bricks on your chest? 
[Scribble].

You kept your heart and soul in your poetry, good read

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind words A. Amos :)
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

You're welcome my friend
Yes i do my boyfriend of almost 2 years :)
When you have someone you love, you cant help but use them as inspiration, when you write.
Your writing when writing of that person, comes out better because its coming from your heart :)
This was very heartfelt and emotional :)
I enjoyed this write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Exactly my point... And thank you I'm glad you liked it :)
cimmy wuv xxxooo

10 Years Ago

your most welcome :)

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Added on February 4, 2014
Last Updated on February 8, 2014
Tags: Him, Love, Poetry, You, Dark, Blue, Romance, kiss, roses, love letters, 14th, heart, bricks, skips, chest, send, beautiful, pink

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La Luna
La Luna

London, United Kingdom



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