Drive into the sea...

Drive into the sea...

A Poem by La Luna

They told me to write about you 
I couldn't.
All that came to my mind was 
Pain, abandonment, b*****d... 

My pen won't move 
It won't let me write 
It moves on its own and the only 
thing it writes is your name 
It writes a word and scribbles it over and over again, 
until the words overlap each other.
It wrote a memory once 
It practically drew us 
We screamed, I hit you
You threw me the keys 
And told me to drive as fast as I can
if I loved you enough 
I would drive into the sea 
And drown.

You said you won't save me.

I remember crying over you and I don’t mean a couple of tears and I’m blue. I’m talking about collapsing and screaming at the moon. 

© 2014 La Luna


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Wow.. I know how you feel .. been through the same thing :/

"I remember crying over you and I don’t mean a couple of tears and I’m blue. I’m talking about collapsing and screaming at the moon " .

Beautiful !


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Awww thank you Sasha I'm glad you know the feeling.
Sasha

10 Years Ago

your most welcome :)
The emotions are powerful in this well written piece. You have truly painted the scene with your imagery. Writing does help. It is a catharsis. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much Lydia :)

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Tags: Pain, abandonment, bastard, hurt, drive fast, sea, blue, love, moon, scream, cry, pen, write, poem, him.

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La Luna
La Luna

London, United Kingdom



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