You..

You make me go insane

You make me loose my breath

You make me go frozen

My breath stop short

A heart beat speed up,

skip beats, and stop in time

Blush rise in my cheeks

time goes slow because of you

You make my fear disappear

You make me fall for you

You have become my hero

Everything seems to make scence

You are a light

my guide

Can I say you are the one

Can I say you make me nervous

So shy and lost in thought

nothing can touch me

You make my past not exist

You make my future bright

You, my darling, Are my knight

 

(c) Luna Kusan

Reviews

[khalid]

very nicely penned. alot of feelings of love and passion expressed in a very nice way. it is strange how much love can change our way of life as if we are born again. sometimes we feel we have never lived before this love..

i loved this piece really..very nice images, nice words picking and flow