Juicy

Juicy

A Poem by Luminousgirl424
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Ripe and Ready

"

Small fruit you are just like me
Not quite ripe
As you age you'll become more sweet
As you reach your peak, your inner wishes are that someone might eat
If they don't, we know what happens next
You will slowly rot turning sour and unwanted
Will you die alone, disgusting and covered in mold?
Or will someone find you just in time?

© 2014 Luminousgirl424


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Very true! I like it a lot. We always wonder, "will there be someone... for me?" OR if we will ever be loved.
Everyone in this world wants to be loved, I don't know a single person that wouldn't want to be loved.
Great job!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luminousgirl424

9 Years Ago

I will read them! I already read a poem of yours... Sure send the link but I can also go on your pag.. read more
C. Lee Battaglia

9 Years Ago

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/chasebattaglia/1445363/
Thanks!
C. Lee Battaglia

9 Years Ago

make sure you leave me a review of what you think of it.



Reviews

Very true! I like it a lot. We always wonder, "will there be someone... for me?" OR if we will ever be loved.
Everyone in this world wants to be loved, I don't know a single person that wouldn't want to be loved.
Great job!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

C. Lee Battaglia

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luminousgirl424

9 Years Ago

I will read them! I already read a poem of yours... Sure send the link but I can also go on your pag.. read more
C. Lee Battaglia

9 Years Ago

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/chasebattaglia/1445363/
Thanks!
C. Lee Battaglia

9 Years Ago

make sure you leave me a review of what you think of it.

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Added on December 29, 2014
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