Can I Ask You To Dance

Tthis song is about one of my best friends that I wish to be more with, although it is unfinished and needs a bit of critiquing I believe it is alright.

Can I ask you to dance?

Am I allowed to break the rules?

Can I break from the crowd?

Can we meet on the dance floor tonight?

We started far away, I came to you,

I asked for your hand, and you gave me two

I lead the way, you followed through

 And as we dance, I whisper to you

 

Can I ask you to dance?

I’ll catch you if you fall

I’ll keep you sturdy when you’re spinning

Bring you close when you’re distant

And as we dance to the music,

Our step became one

Our hearts pound in melody

With the sound of this grand symphony

 

Can I ask you to dance?

Am I allowed to ask, will you care if I do

Will you think I’m daft, will you turn me away

 Will we be one tonight, or will I be alone once again

If you say yes to me, we can dance all night

Until the sun rises and the moon is set,

Until the stars are faded and the skies are clear

 

Can I ask you to dance?

Will you hold me as I held you?

Will you look me in the eyes?

If I say the three words, will you say them back?

And if you do, will you say it sincere?

From the bottom of your heart

I love you

 

Can I ask you to dance?

Am I allowed to bend the rules?

Can I break from the crowd?

Can we meet on the dance floor tonight?

 

 

Author's Note

If you have any suggestions on how I can make this work I am open to it and please do comment :) also please suggest an audience

Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

the simplicity speaks so loud and dreamy like in this piece... I wouldn't change it at all.
great read!!

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

I think everyone could read this. Its really good and I think it should stay the same.