Metaphysical Emotions

A poem about emotions and the universe.

 

Metaphysical Emotions

 

 

Stars fall out of the night sky, I look up at them as they get closer to my

Soul. They finally smash all over my body likes dozens of silver

Firework exploding at once!

 

 

 

I dive into the moon and swim around in its treacle like surface.

         

       

 

   I suck into my lungs the surface of the sun! Warm liquid glides around

Inside of me. The hair on my arm stand erect, I feel like I am about

To have an orgasm…Bang!

                         

                           I explode into golden Stardust.

 

 ©LukeRitta 

Reviews

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

I simply adore what you attempted here, the title is amazing! It's more astronomical than I think I anticipated but it works well as a concept.

[Jessica Faith]

Wow. You are such a great writer, I really did enjoy reading this. The last bit of the poem really ties it all together and makes for a great ending.

[Judas Hammer]

Yo, I really like this, Love the emotional set up. I enjoyed this read...

[LilyT]

High octane imagination! Gripping and involved writing.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

delicious sensate strata of emotions!~

Wow, this is so me, as it is Universe.... awesome!

[Lily Mae]

Back to square one but no better way to be... I like the use of silver and gold..:) x