Architecture of faith

A poem about the buildings in the world of religion.

Architecture of faith

 

 

A cold mosque made of white marble

Is warmed up by

A warm

Sunrise

 

 

 

A still lake with a cover of white mist.

A golden temple floats in

The middle of the

Lake like

A Dead

Leaf

 

 

 

A small synagogue is hidden away

Next To a ancient dusty wall and

A bunch of old olives Trees

That Scatter around

The holy

Land

 

 

 

A gothic cathedral the smells of

Burning incense stands in

The centre of a small,

Sleepy village

 Like an old

Giant

 

 

Reviews

[Caradoc]

Hmm...

I like the scheme and the downward flowing format. Your presentation is very well done in this poem. The way the verses stand almost reminds me of a cup or a small bowl. The description is also nice, portraying each building and its location in a calm, direct manner.

I wonder though at the point of this poem...

Well done though.

-Caradoc