Crazy Dreams

A poem about strange-crazy dreams!!

Crazy dreams

 

 

My eyes close!

 

I am eating a fancy meal with Hitler and Jesus.

 

My eyes close!

 

I am making love to Ayn Rand. NOOOOOOOO!

The philosopher has now metamorphosed into a movie star.

 I am now making love to Marilyn Monroe,

YESSSSSSSSS!

 

My eyes close!

 

I am walking down a bland shopping street where only

homeless men are the mangers of the shops

and rich entrepreneurs stack shelf’s.

 

My eyes close!

 

A strange hideous animal is following me across a foggy bog.

It smells of greed and death, the animal not the bog.

It is wearing a grey suite, it has hardly any hair and

It defiantly has no soul.

It is an English politician.

 

My eyes close!

 

I drink a glass of brandy with Napoleon,

 a Shot of Vodka with Stalin,

 a bottle of whisky with Churchill,

 and a cellar of red wine with Mussolini.

 

My eyes close!

 

I wake up and I have to go to work and get

through another day in the dull, blandness

world of the 21^st century.

 

               My eyes close!

Reviews

[Miranda Manne]

WOW. You certainly don't shy away from writing with meaning and message. You're very upfront about your politicality, especially in this poem, and it's both refreshing and abrasive. If I were a shy-er girl, I'd be afraid of this poem.

Though I will say, I like that you're bold enough to make the exclamation point your b***h. Keep up the good work

[Scandalous]

This was... interesting. Not particularly sure what to think about this piece. If that was your goal, you've definitively succeeded!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

I love the meaning of this

[POETIC VIXEN]

BAM!....U r to die 4

[Miles]

Again, awesome, and awesome. Thank youu!!

[heart of an angel]

i love this poems but its true some dreams are very strange but that what makes them so unique , they could also be a way of telling you something you just have to figure it out, great work i enjoyed reading your poem and ready to read some more of your new work

[Jazz]

A brilliant poem! Thank you for sharing! It'd be amazing if scenes such as these could be reality. History is so interesting. It was full of characters and events that simply wouldn't happen in this day and age.

[Science girl]

Oh I very much enjoyed this! Dreaming is so wonderful and how disappointed I get when that magical world is disturbed by my damn alarm clock! haha great piece!

[Colie]

I really liked this poem... it was interesting.. i made me want to keep reading it to see what happens. It is very well written! I love it :)

[Jessi Leigh]

Best recommended poem so far!!! Luke I love your work... WOW... They say history repeats itself.. So let's hope the awakening comes and dreams, vivid colour, amazing sound, incredible tastes and crazy adventures return to this world. If you look carefully.. You'll catch some of them already. Once again, thank you.

[M.Babu]

Curiously engaging this was :D

~M.Babu~