Lunchtime with the Gods

Lunchtime with the Gods

A Poem by Luke Ritta
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a poem about gods and food.

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The lonesome sardine darted through the calm ocean as the midday 
sun made the sardine glow like a knife made from stainless steel.
26 seconds latter the sardine is caught by an old Greek man
 with a big grey moustache. He guts and descales the
 fish; he cuts out two shiny fillets, wipes
 the knife on his dirty trousers 
and then chucks the carcass 
of the sardine back to
 where it  was 
born.
As the old man chews on the raw oily fish, the ferocious heat from the sun continues to stream down on to the small boat. The heat was so intense that the man felt like he was being pricked by a thousand and one tiny needles, while buckets of liquid metal was being poured over his shoulders.
The fish tasted of a mix of life and death combined. He then takes a piece 
of crusty bread in his hand and dips it into a small bowl of 
extra virgin olive oil; the bread soaks up the
 golden green liquid. The man happily 
eats his fish, bread and 
oil with a glow of 
radiance beaming
 form his 
eyes.
Poseidon sits content in his underwater cave. The walls are covered with hundreds of silver pearls; an eerie milky light penetrates out from the entrance of the cave and dissolves into the dark void of the ocean. Poseidon chews on slimy dark green kelp and scoops out saffron coloured sea urchins out of their shells with his index finger. The taste of iodine erupts onto his tongue as he swallows the sea urchins. Hundreds of plankton swim through his long wavy hair, a small 
crab crawls out of his right nostril. Poseidon looks up at old fishing 
boat floating on the still surface of the sea.
Small sweat droplets occasionally fell from the old 
mans bushy eyebrows like pinecones descending
 from their branches. One sweat droplet looked
 like a huge teardrop as it leisurely rolled 
down the man’s neck and melted
 into his hairy grey
  chest.
He grabbed a bottle of red wine from under the shade of his seat and 
drank the cool, tart liquid with joy and contentment. He put 
the bottle down and stroked his brittle moustache with his
 index finger and thumb. He then wiped his 
wet forehead with the back of his hand
 and with an expression of curiosity
 spread across his face he gazes
  into the bright blue-sky 
overhead.
Zeus looks down at the old man in the fishing boat while crunching on pomegranate seeds. Zeus then wipes the red juices away from his mouth, picks up a chalice full of frothy beer and swallows the golden liquid in one go. Zeus picks a few black grapes from a vine dangling over his shoulder, he then combs his longs sliver beard very slowly with delicate oyster shells.
The old Greek man dabbed his golden baldhead 
with a napkin while the skeleton of 
the sardine slowly floats
 down towards the 
seabed like a
 lost feather
 never to
 be seen
 again.



© 2012 Luke Ritta


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This is wonderful! The mix of man and gods :) and the description is so creative that I could picture it playing out in front of me - which is brilliant, and what makes me love stories and poems that are able to do that :D
As always, I love reading your work. thank you for sharing this, amazing! :D

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very flowingly dissonant and descriptive piece..very pungent write..
could have titled it sushi in a rowboat

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I like the logic of the poem. God's and men are the same in some ways. I like the compete story. Description took me to the sea. I could see the carving of the fish to the God's enjoying their meal. Thank you for sharing the outstanding story.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Luke Ritta
Luke Ritta

London, United Kingdom



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Hi, I am 26 and from London. I love writing short stories, poems and novels. My writing is a bit like Jack Kerouac and Ernest Hemingway. I love reading classic Literature, from Tolstoy to Proust, I .. more..

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