Confinement.

Confinement.

A Poem by Luke Cazalet-Smith

There are fragments of unspoilt beauty scattered across this vast, pitiless universe. Minuscule, unadulterated shards that attest the epitome of allurement.
Deceitfully, mortal-eyes were not fabricated to observe such phenomenon.
Yet, I am but one.
A solitary.
Privileged to bare witness to the sight of such rarity.

© 2015 Luke Cazalet-Smith


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This has an almost indescribably feel to it that I could only try describe as raw, powerful, and unforgiving.

Quite an intense piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luke Cazalet-Smith

9 Years Ago

I am finding it hard to comprehend the positive feedback I am receiving, to which I thank you once m.. read more
Astrid

9 Years Ago

Happy to help :) Keep up your amazing work
I've never really explored much poetry, although I've always supported my friends and to be honest that's really my only experience. This speaks to me in an indescribable way, thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luke Cazalet-Smith

9 Years Ago

No, thank you. Thank you for offering such kind words, and spending such valuable time reading a pie.. read more
I had David Attenborough doing a voice over here Luke - not being levitous - his scripts are after all written by professionals.
loved the use of 'deceitfully' and its implications.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luke Cazalet-Smith

9 Years Ago

Such a profound comment, but appreciated none the less! Thank you once more, for taking the time to .. read more

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Added on December 18, 2014
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Luke Cazalet-Smith
Luke Cazalet-Smith

Gillingham, Kent, United Kingdom



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I am not a writer. Nor do I claim to be. I am merely a young man with a mind suffused with words, attempting to put them to paper. I hope you enjoy what it is I am fortunate enough to conjure. more..

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