A Broken Love

¨We run to the ones that make us cry, yet let go of the ones that comfort us.¨

We are born with emotions full of care and love.

Yet there are others who chose to suppress the emotions we have,

 as if they never existed.

It's only when we are shown true care

that our shield will begin to break.

Every day I think these words,

and every day my shield grows stronger.

Until one night while I sleep,

I start to feel as if something worm is touching

my soft, pale skin.

It was when I woke

that I saw eyes filled with stars.

These eyes had stopped my time,

freezing it as if it were flowing water turned to ice.

It was in that moment that I had fallen,

fallen into a web of lies,

and a down a well filled to the brim

with blood.

It was before I realized it that I had been stabbed,

the one moment of weakness. 

Led to my death

Author's Note

I have never written a poem before so don't be rude when commenting. Also have you ever been heart broken if so how bad.

Reviews

[Mr. Mills]

You should right more poems. i thought this was great. It truly touched me on the inside.