Everything About You

Happiness; elation; completion

All things I have felt  since

I met the best thing to ever

Walk into my life: you

 

Wrapped in your arms of steel

I am protected from the world

No outside force able to harm me

With you there, overseeing my safety

 

Your soft lips pressed against mine

Send passionate flames to my core

Growing brighter with every kiss

Chasing away a ny inner demons

 

Your words squirm into my ear

Then travel lower from there

Flooding into my once miniscule heart

Giving it a loving glow meant just for you

 

The way your hand fits in mine

Is like two pieces of a complicated puzzle

Finally coming together at last...

Snuggling as one, nice and tight, perfect

 

It's not just the way your eyes find mine

So easily in a crowded room or the way

They brighten and your mouth spreads

Into a wide genuine smile when you do

 

It's not the way you  hold me so close

As if you are afraid someone might

Speed past you, snatching me from

Your arms, never to return again

 

It's not the way tears fill my eyes at the

Mere thought of losing you, my chest

Tightening, prepared for the knives of

Betrayal & Loss from only thoughts...

 

It's everything about you! That makes me

love you so much...want to spend forever

with you... It's... just...... simply.........

Everything about you.

Reviews

[cheeeeese]

This was so touching and beautiful. I got that warm feeling in my heart while reading this, and you can really describe your feeling amazingly. The poem was filled with emotion and it all flowed really well. I enjoyed this 100%

[ZaZa]

This is beautiful. While reading I felt myself smile, because love is crazy yet beautiful. This was so loving and heartwarming. This person you are talking about should feel very lucky, because you are talking about him like this. Very nice job. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :)

[ebur™]

Oh wow, that was very expressing and an amazing write. It was great, when you introduced another aspect on the first line, then described it in the next few lines... it gave such a good description. Like 'rehab' had stated, I felt like you poured everything into this piece and it meant alot. I loved how you ended the poem to match the title [but i guess that's the point :P] Overall, wonderful, outstanding job. 100%

[rehab]

Wow. That was very touching and heartwarming, I felt like you poured your soul into this poem, and it came out with a very outstanding piece ;) Especially the ending, it was like it wrapped it all up perfectly.