Star

Star

A Poem by Ally Baker

You are like my bright

Star in what used to be a

Black hole of a life

© 2010 Ally Baker


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Good job in describing hopeless to hope by nature. Good haiku with a meaning.

Posted 14 Years Ago


The amount of meaning in this little piece is amazing. You did a good job of keeping it short and having significance at the same time. It makes me feel complete :) Very good poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 15, 2010
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