Background toA Story by Ally BakerThe killer's name is Evan Longmire. He had been in love with Anabell since the first grade and watched her from afar most of his life. At one point he had talked to her for a little while, but the conversation kept coming back to Jack and he couldn't stand it. That was before her and Jack were going out. He assumed it was just a crush and that Jack was too obnoxious to see her inner beauty that Evan loved so much. Anabell and Jack started going out and it made Evan paranoid. He watched them from afar for over a year, how they looked at eachother, how they sat so close. This drove him mad, almost causing him to become an insomniac. He would spend nights trying to figure out how to prove to them that they did not love eachother; how she would be happier with him. Evan is the same age as Anabell and Jack, 17. He looks older, around 25 from the many sleepless nights and from wearing such a serious face all of the time. He started following them on their dates, watching them, studying everything they did. Evan kept thinking about how the picture was all wrong; how he should be the one holding her close; smelling her cocunut and mango scented shampoo; feeling the soft velvety texture of her radiant skin. Anabell and Jack were the It couple of their highschool who everyone talked about. Then, when he heard about Anabell and Jack's planned trip up to the cabins, he lost it. He could not take it anymore. He had to get rid of the reason Anabell was not talking about him to random guys; he had to get rid of the reason Anabell was so distracted. © 2008 Ally Baker |
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