Two

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he rope cuts deeper into Laura’s arms as the cloaked man tightens it behind her back. Then he tightens the ropes around her legs, chuckling at he squeal of pain that escapes her lips.

“I am not who you think I am! Please! You have the wrong person!” she tries to yell through the tape that covers her mouth. Unfortunately for her though, it came out muffled and inaudible.

The cloaked man smiles down at her and closes the lid of the trunk, leaving her in complete darkness, not even a sliver of light escapes into the trunk. The car vibrates with life under Laura’s gagged body gently, telling her no clues of her destination.

Laura

Reviews

[Meradee]

I think you should extend this. It just seems too short. I don't feel the fear that Laura feels. I want to feel what she feels.
Pepper...

[These Haunted Hallways]

Woh, that's gotta be one damn scary experience to go thru, let me tell ya lol. Although a short chapter, it was well stated, and the message got thru clear. It's really getting good hehe. Nice work!

B.A.

[~~~*-*~~~Kyra~~~*-*~~~]

u missed a letter of "the" and put "he" but i like it~!! ^^ good job ;D

[Jetta Zippora]

I'm getting chills! Can't wait to read more! It sounds like a good story, and even though you're not sure of where it's going, it's going well! I believe that once you place an idea on paper, you should let the story take over and go wherever it wants to go. You're doing awesome! Kudos to you!