Thin

I wonder

Does He think

I am pretty now?

Thin?

What does He think?

 

So many months

Spent hungry

Guzzling water

Watching food

Smelling food

But never daring

To eat food

 

Looking in the mirror

I still see fat

On my new bony body

But does He?

 

What does He think?

Reviews

[Sofia]

very dramatical...in a good way. scary, sad, and true...why is it that they (as in the anorexic people) can still see fat on their body when they're just bones? I always wonder.

[Laraine Davis]

so good, ally!
really it is! ily and your writing, you're really really talented.
i even read a short story about this girl who thought she was fat, and she went anorexic, and the guy she liked was disgusted to look at her because all she was was bones. It was really sad, because she died from starvation.
I really liked it:]