I Can Wait

everyday i watch you come and go

when i see you come

my heart flies to the skies

when i see you go

my heart cries for you to come back

 

you are my best friend

& i am yours

but sadly thats all we are

 

when you look at me

my mind melts

&the world around me fades away

 

when i think about you & her

i catch myself drawing broken hearts

 

when i see you with her

my heart fills with pain & sorrow

& my eyes fill with tears

 

you are no good for me

you put me in pain on a daily basis

but how can i stay away?

 

we're best friends

if i stay away

you will wonder why

& would i be able to tell you?

not while you're with her

not while i'm just your bestfriend

 

so I'll wait

I'll wait through the pain

I'll wait through the tears

I'll wait until she's gone

I'll wait for you to love me

the way i love you

because i do love you

and i can wait

Author's Note

please ignore capitilization and puncuation errors.
none of my poems are personal experiences of mine.
they are all just from my imagination.

Reviews

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

Well you captured the emotion very well even though it's only ur imagination!!
Very well writtin!!
Kudos!!

[DRIVEN]

Good job with flow and rythym..The situation being one most readers are familiar with

."i'm your best friend, but I can wait"

nice write

[melancholia skies]

My, my, aren't you an inspirational writer. You created flow, and rhymic without expierencing that kind of thing. You channeled it well, which takes alot of skill. Great job. It was quite the poem. The yearning for another. The visionairy was very much there. Which again, made this quite the poem. Wonderful job, Ashley.

[Adela Muresan]

A touching piece, communicating feelings many share.
The agony and the enormous desire of affection is palpable in your verses.

A.M.

[Ally Baker]

this is me eilidh of course i hacked into ur account after u let me but i will forget everything about this username and password cuz i dont rite and to me its not important..........and to teh good stuff....this poem says alot about ur imagination as u say in ur authors note thing and yes ppl i help ashley with a couple of ideas like the skydiving 1 if she had it here anyways adios byeee!!!!