No Longer Invisible

I walk by you

as i do every day

i glance up at you

but you do not notice me

you never have

 

I dont know why i think you will

i still doodle hearts

& you still invade my thoughts

 

You walk into my class

I am frozen in place

you hand a paper to the teacher

she points to the empty chair beside me

i start to panick

you walk over and sit down

 

You turn to me

'Hi, I'm chase'

'Jenna,' i squek

you say 'i know,

i've seen you around'

my heart skips a beat

 

we spend the class period talking

i talked with ease to my surprise

once you started

the bell rings.

but you're still looking at me

and still talking to me

 

we part our ways

for our next class

 

the next morning

i walk by you

as i always do

you notice me today

and smile widely

i smile back

for i am no longer invisible

Author's Note

None of my poems are from personal experiences. They are all just from my imagination.

Reviews

[Karissa.]

Such a great write on what could be "young love." Too bad experiences like that rarely happen. Lol. Great write... especially since you used it with just your imagination.
Keep up the writing, it's brilliant.
~Karissa

[Serenity Wolf]

I know the feeling and you captured that feeling in your writing. Well done. Never stop writing...you have a talent.

-Sw

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

i agree, this is really sweet..to bad it hardly ever happens though. but how you convey new and innocent love is,well...lovely!!!

[xxlunamaxwellxx]

i like this.
it sounds like something that once happened to me.

[Laraine Davis]

awww i luhv it!
i wish all crush stories were like that. wen the guy finally realizes that you totally love him and he can never figure that out.
but really, this is good! im gonna read ur other ones