to be titled

If I said shoot me, 
Could you do it?
If I said it was alright?
if I said it was okay?
Could you face yourself?
Could you face the world?
Would it change if i wanted it?
If they wanted it?
What if you wanted it?
And how about if held your hand?
If squeezed your grip?
If forced your hand?
Would it matter,
If we knew the other side?
Knew of any other side?
Knew if there was no side?
Would it matter to any one else?
Would anybody notice?
Would any mark be left?
Worry not, the choice isn't yours,
Maybe you believe it is,
Maybe i believe it is.
But we both know its not,
We both know its mine,
We both know its fine.
What we don't know is the issue,
When the end seems so far,
Then suddenly so close.
It boggles the mind of everyone,
I envy your ignorative bliss.

Reviews

[alexlessah]

i love the flowing. nice very unique

[Call Me Cash]

Did you purposely omit capitalisation?
Apart from that, I enjoyed it. It flows well with decent structure.
Overall I loved it :)
Thanks for posting
LC