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A Poem by Luguolo

Their thoughts flood my mind,

Crushing what was there,

Trampling it with their thoughts, their desires.

They can not see I am not them, they can not see I am my own.

I do not belong to you; I am not your pet,

I don't need to be trained; I don’t need to be taught!

I am not your clay to be formed in your image,

I am not misguided, lost, or confused.

I am here, and I am different,

I won’t conform and I will like it,

I will be me whether you like it or not,

Odd, different, disruptive, and strong!

I am this so don't try to mold it,

Because your not the only one who effect the minds of others.

Should it continue, should it persist,

You will find your mind filled with mist,

I will talk circles around your ideals and beliefs,

I will rip all you have to its core.

I use no candy coating,

I leave nothing untouched,

So remember should you wish me to be you,

That I can change you too.

 

© 2008 Luguolo


Author's Note

Luguolo
well, it was written in a bit of a rush, i am more trying to hear what is thought of the message, or how you read it, then actually writing style, grammer, and all that jazz.

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Luguolo
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alright! update time! i'm here to put out my writing without fear of it being stolen, so here i am! lets see if my writing is decent enough for everyone else. more..

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