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my choices have more then your two roads,

they lead off in more ways then you can see.

and this isn't somthing i can just stand and think about,

no that isnt how this works.

the twists and turns of these roads have towers built along them,

they shoot words at me, making me dance, impeading my thoughts.

they shoot whys, and wheres, and hows at me,

bigger bolts of guilt and shame.

how is one to concentrate? how is one to think?

what will you do if this road is wrong?

they are waiting for your retreat.

stand and dodge for weeks on end,

or pick and hurdle down one path.

that choice, atleast, is limited,

but what will you decide?

Reviews

[Luguolo]

one down wouldnt make sence in that sentence, well was meant to be well, but did fit just right, and i did mean towers, thank you. but no, one down would not signify going down a path.

[Wolfwind Words]

the twists and turns of these roads have towards built along them, (I think you ment "towers")???
well, stand and dodge for weeks on end, (First word? we'll)???
or pick and hurdle down one. (Flip last two words.) "one down" would sound better.
Other then those three things, i really liked the problem of choices that we encounter in life.
And the medival theme!
Great job, keep up the good work.