Insanity's Creed

Insanity's Creed

A Poem by Luguolo
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inspired by a song ^^;

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You went to far, when you decided to tangle with me,

Wrapped in the bonds of my insanity!

Your failure is close, your end is near,

You should have seen this when you messed with fear!

Its pulls you in to the world of my mind,

Twisted and folded, and devoid of the kind!

It wraps you, feels you, hears your mourning,

Why didn't you leave WHEN I GAVE YOU THE warning!

I foretold this end, I warned you what's coming,

You ignored my heeding, and now your all running!

Now it's to late, its all been released,

You cower before what you've made a beast!

This is your doing, this is born of your creed,

You spoke the words, that made this thing feed!

So now what is your course? what is your action?

Its power is growing, with each denied benediction!

You let the hate swell, you let it combine,

Now it will come, and let its dark light shine.

 

© 2008 Luguolo


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I like it! It flowed smoothly all the way through. I like how it seemed to speak of mans own ignorance creeping back up in the night as something terribly evil. This was a really good read! good job! Keep it up!

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Luguolo
Luguolo

Toronto, Canada



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