The tears of Poseidon

Their necks elastic in stupor,
while gazes crawl pathetically
Toward a primitive fire;
Ignited by the fumbling hands
Of toddling
resurrectors
Slaves of the heat
Their true worship
A Triumph of evolutionary ecstasy
Their mouths pour like the
Floods over Atlantic pantheons
Swirling into the mesmerizing abyss
With Minds glued to their silent
Jewels.

Author's Note

Interpret as you will.

Reviews

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I like the strong imagery you create. I can't really remember the story of Poseidon right now I should look it up but I love the phrases you use like "of toddling resurrectors" and "evolutionary ecstasy." Aslo the visual of mouths pouring like floods over Atlantic pantheons is so cool. Very interesting read!