one kiss?

<3 feelings change, but words remain ^^

i glanced up, i see your face

i wonder how you survive this place

such a beautiful soul caught by time

i sit and wonder could you be mine

 

your eyes scream out for attention

i cold give it to you now

i will never forget to mention

how amazing you truly are like 'wow' 

 

you look so cute

you seem so innocent

when we're together we are so mute

people dont know, they wouldn't understand

i bare no dark intent

just grip onto my hand

 

these feelings for you they seem so strong

your gentle touch is what i long

 

gazing into your eyes

seeing into your soul

there is no hesitation

i know yo deserve more

 

one kiss? too much?

I'll wait my turn

there's no rush

this lession ill learn

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

Nice. Honest and open write

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

aww dis is cute :') the rhyming technique is fine.. you show how you felt about this person (yet i cant remember who it was about, im sure you told me...) you should write more honeybunny, you're amazing at it x

[Sophles]

You seem slightly too caught up in trying to fill a rhyming scheme... If your always trying to find as rhyme for a word, you'll never express your true feelings ....