Contradictions
A Poem by
Lucy-Mia
A poem about all the different sides we show, and how people never really know us.
Kind - Mean
Funny - Serious
Trusting - untrusting
Love - Hate
Happy - Sad
Confident - Fear
Content - Envy
Grown up - Childish
Clever - Stupid
Creative - Destructive
Truthful - dishonest
Complete - in pieces
Myself - Someone else
M E !
© 2011 Lucy-Mia
Reviews
Marvelous ending. Surprisingly powerful and strong, with a clever beat and style. And the ending was nice and punchy. Clever word use. Loved it
Posted 12 Years Ago
different !
Posted 13 Years Ago
different !
brilliant way of looking at how complex every single one of us are. Really liked this
Posted 13 Years Ago
brilliant way of looking at how complex every single one of us are. Really liked this
Wow good invention...
Posted 13 Years Ago
Wow good invention...
I fixed it hun, I didn't even notice ! HA HA! THanks :-)
Posted 13 Years Ago
I fixed it hun, I didn't even notice ! HA HA! THanks :-)
No offense Lucy, but you spelled Contradictions wrong. LOL The way you "spelt" it sounds French. Sorry, just being a little smart arse as you Brits say. heeheeheehee Spell it how you wish hun. No one cares.
Posted 13 Years Ago
No offense Lucy, but you spelled Contradictions wrong. LOL The way you "spelt" it sounds French. Sorry, just being a little smart arse as you Brits say. heeheeheehee Spell it how you wish hun. No one cares.
Great, now I'm more confused of you :P. Totally human's nature and imperfect perfection. How ironic.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Great, now I'm more confused of you :P. Totally human's nature and imperfect perfection. How ironic.
Will I ever get to know "ME?" ;-) Excellent way of showing our contradictory natures.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Will I ever get to know "ME?" ;-) Excellent way of showing our contradictory natures.
So true, love how it is expressed!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
So true, love how it is expressed!!!
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Added on July 30, 2011
Last Updated on July 31, 2011
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Lucy-Mia Stockport, Greater Manchester, United Kingdom
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I am a happy go lucky girl from England, with Irish roots. I am hoping this website will help me grow as a poet. I have loved to write poetry since a small child. I don't care if it is considered goo..
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