Circle

Circle


Circles just not a shape
It is many things

It is broozes
Broozes from falling

Or from hitting
Hitting from who

From parents and sisters
Thats abuse of children

When children get hit
for no reason its abuse

Children get abused
almost every day more than once

We cant do much
about abuse but it should stop

Reviews

[Jvl narasimharao]

It is a realistic poem that happens in every home

[smileyface123]

You're a very talented writer well done
btw, its bruises not broozes
well done

[realmwriter]

We can stop abuse by educating those who cause it and those who stand by and watch and do nothing to stop it...! It needs to stop, period!

[prodicallife]

Lucky
Great message very important and meaningfull for each and every human being. I liked it i don`t want to repeat it again you are an attractive writter who can drive the attention of any reader as per your choice.

Kindly try to make it a bit longer.

Keep up the good work

Regards
PRODICAL